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I don't even know how to post a picture of my project on here My final project has improvements. The biggest one is making sure no shapes overlap each other. I made sure they were connected while at the same time checking for ones that crossed over. I also changed the way the orange slices were shaped. I made the triangles larger to differentiate from the edge of the orange. This is supposed to tell the person looking at it that these are larger and more important. 

Looking back at my Project 3, I can definitely see things that I can improve upon. The main thing I noticed was when I layered them stem for the fruits I shouldn't have just put it on top, but instead integrated it. Like making the fruit bend, or using a different color so it wouldn't look like I added it, but instead it's a part of it. I also think the shadows for some of the fruits could have been placed better. It's really inconsistent throughout all the fruits. I plan on going through what I talked about and improving these, while at the same time making minor adjustments to the images, such as the curve of the pear and the size of the banana.